Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors, which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important.
The measure of one’s country’s success is based on many aspects, and not just economic status alone. There are factors that contribute to make it a successful country as a whole, such as the overall health status of every countryman, safety and security, and technological advancements. However, among all of these factors mentioned, I believe that the total well-being of every individual living in a country is the greatest determinant.
To start with, a country’s success is based on the wellness of the total population. A country that has an increased number of mentally and physically ill people would have useless economic progress because their people have difficulties in achieving their utmost potential as a part of the community. For instance, the government needs strong, emotionally stable and healthy soldiers to help enhance the security of their country. For this reason, the country needs to provide first the physiological and health needs of the population in order to build a society that is successful.
Another factor that makes a country progressive is the safety and security it has. This aspect is to be considered as a measure of ones' country’s success because there are many threats that hover around the world. These threats are not only man-made, such as wars and terrorism, but they could also be from natural causes, such as storms and earthquakes. Countries that are far more advance have people who live their lives carefree because they are protected. Their people can enjoy having vacations without the fear of being attacked in the streets. Also, when people are assured that they are safe and secure in their place they can live well and meaningful lives.
Lastly, a country’s progress is measured by its technological advancements, such as internet access, sustainable transportation system and environmental-friendly machines plantations. The internet access gives information to the people and it makes communication accessible to everyone, hence making the community connected to enhance social and economic activities. This also true if the country has a reliable transport system, people can travel faster thus making more time for other important life tasks. In these advancements, it should also be noted that there should be a consideration with the status of the environment, for the destruction of natural resources is not an indication of a country’s success.
Overall, a country’s success is multi-factorial. This is not only measured by the economic status it has but with the overall living experience of an individual, their safety and security and convenience they experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2276.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45803357314 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22714778128 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494004796163 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0768027758 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.789473684 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333767404097 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115224301428 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757049536989 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202875634799 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494775413508 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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