Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that advertising is increasingly becoming popular these days and some people argue that it is too common and we no longer notice it. In my opinion, I believe that advertisement is still a powerful tool in terms of encouraging people to purchase things.
There are several reasons why people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Firstly, we can see ads anywhere, ranging from TV and phones to public places like subways, markets, and motorways, so we tend to consider them to be normal things and not care about them anymore. Furthermore, people usually link advertising to frustrating stuff, especially when they do not like those products. If people watch an ad on their phones a lot of times, they may feel annoyed about it and probably think that it is a bad product.
However, I believe that advertisement plays an important role in encouraging and making people to purchase items. Nowadays, there are a lot of products, so advertising is necessary for companies to introduce their new products and then sell them. Besides, some advertisements such as promotions, big sale campaigns can encourage people to buy stuff even if they do not really need it only because companies offer a very good deal. For example, Black Friday is an occasion when many companies advertise and give big discounts and it is true that these programs persuade a lot of people to buy things.
In conclusion, although some people now take advertising for granted and argue that it is no longer effective, I personally believe that it is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-10-02 | LauraTing | 84 | view |
| 2024-04-01 | tran quynh | 78 | view |
| 2024-04-01 | tran quynh | 56 | view |
| 2024-04-01 | tran quynh | 56 | view |
| 2024-04-01 | tran quynh | 89 | view |
- The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15 year olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK 73
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 67
- In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this How can people research this 84
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years 73
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 600, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...persuade a lot of people to buy things. In conclusion, although some people now ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8731884058 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.851969457 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.9824331948 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.272727273 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425793605645 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167652971769 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106697299642 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268136455042 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406001117343 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.