Some people say the best way to discourage smoking is to make smoking illegal in public places. Other people say that this is not enough and that other measures are needed.
Discuss about both views and give your opinion
In the information age, while some people think that making smoking illegal in society places is the best way to tackle this situation, others believe that only one way is not enough to alleviate this issue and more measures are needed.
A growing body of research says that if making smoking illegal in any public places seems to become a new law, it can alleviate the number of smokers. To be more precise, anybody must pay a sum of money to smoke in society and there are not too many people who are ready to break the law. Taking Vietnam as an example, according to the Vietnam Institute research, there was a significant downward trend when governments and authorities applied this law into individuals’ life, from more than 64% to 37% in total. Whenever there are not some strengths to individuals, they will get rid of this out of their life immediately.
However, it will not be enough for any countries if they want to reduce the huge quantity of people not to smoke in society. This means that governments and authorities need to apply stronger solutions into citizens’ life such as paying more fine for their bad action, even taking into a crime. Besides that, educating their awareness, especially young people and teenagers, is one of the effective solution to solve this pitfall. For example, in Turkey, there is a surprising result after half of a year, the governments and authorities applied more laws into people’s life, is that they prevent a plethora of people to smoke who could smoke in society, even people who are ready to pay a fine.
Overall, there are too many adverse results we can see in the future to the smokers, so the governments and authorities need to enact more new laws to tackle this problem as soon as possible. In my opinion, I reckon that more laws need to apply soon to alleviate this issue faster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, while, for example, i reckon, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73765432099 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57765205632 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0377890427 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.545454545 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283526147816 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110446869631 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944153678291 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188280797229 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106577764135 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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