Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although it is sometimes thought that building more sporting facilities are the most effective way to improve public health; nevertheless, others claim that playing a sport or building more sports clubs alone is not sufficient in addition to it other measures are required to ensure public health. I admit that sports are beneficial for health, but in my opinion, people also need to follow a healthy diet and a healthy lifestyle.
On the one hand, there are several benefits to indulging in sporting activities. Most of the outdoor and indoor sports require physical effort and this, in turn, makes a person active and flexible. For instance, a person indulging in regular games is bound to be fitter than a person who does not participate in any physical activities or sports. In addition to it, sports also maintain mental health and keeps a person agile and active in their thinking.
On the other hand, playing a sport alone is not sufficient. It is also crucial for people to watch their diet, and I agree. If they follow a nutritious diet and play a game regularly, they have excellent chances of maintaining good health. For example, no matter how much sport we play, it is not going to be that effective until we follow a proper diet and exercise regime. Exercise helps the body to gain the agility and lose extra calories, and a balanced diet makes sure that the amount of supplements required to the body is supplied efficiently and the body does not put on the extra calories and fat. Therefore, it is clear why people consider measures like exercise and a balanced diet more effective than merely playing sport to attain good health.
In conclusion, people might vary in their opinion, but I firmly advocate that playing a sport alone will not be that effective in improving the fitness level of a person. In addition to playing, people should exercise regularly and eat a balanced diet.
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also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8501529052 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58404538245 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492354740061 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0403579835 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196958114785 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700022250613 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658847040457 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129862618002 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809069319925 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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