Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however say that this would have little effect on public health and the other measure are requiredpossibly some of the society possessed health on themselves and will raise awareness about their health after the government increased the sport facilities. It can be believed that a part of people already have an active lifestyle and they need a better facilities to improve their health. For instance, they are too bored for having the exercises at the gum whose need some fresh air such as jogging in the park or riverside. It means that the government have to reconstruction the parks and riversides such as adding up fitness or sport tools. Therefore, the sport lovers will get the advantages for expanding the sport facilities. Looking at the comparison, there is no doubt that increasing number of sport facilities is not effective before most of the society realize about their health care.
In conclusion, from right here I stand that I don’t believed that improving the number of sport facilities is the best way for increasing public health. In my opinion, it gives more drawbacks rather than the benefits.
In today's world. It is become controversial topic that the best method for reforming public health with add amount of sport facilities or those way not have huge impact and believed many action needed. Several people have disadvantages of view about the improve method with supplied sport facilities or think somw advantages might can supported increasing publi health with another step. Both of view will be discussed with fully considered
On the hand hand, people opinion that increasing the total sports facilities had few impact on health society and was able improved other way had positiv effect. Firstly, a person's health level was not able only be improved by exercise. But supported with daily healthy food. As some public figure who live healthy with a vegetarian diet way. Anotjer factor was adequate rest. Those was quite difficult for humans todat had dense work hours and high stress levels. Yoyng excecutives who live to work trigger ilness which caused by fatigue such as heart diswase even though their exercises regulary. For that it was very important had many method to rise the quality of public health, not only provided sports facilities but in modify life style.
Differs witg the benefits above, the drawaback which occured when Government add the total of sport facilities was not equal with people interest to exercise. At last, the facilities was meaningless, cause grow amlunt of that not comparable with increasing public consciousness to obtain health life with used sport toolw. Such as case in several city which prepared sport facilities in some public place only survived at along time. Therefore must considered society readiness in environment when sport facilities will buolt. It is no doubt based by the comparison, increasing number of sport facilitied not effective solution without desire a health life
To sum up, from right here I stand I do not believed that sport facility which enhanced was best method to accelarate public health. In my opinion, it is gives more disadvantages rather than the advantages. However, it depends public awareness about health life supported by sport facilities
it it " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">is believed by some that people can improve their health by sports facilities, while others assert that it would create some effects effects " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">on individuals health . however, i think that sports sports " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">can be improved masses health. I will discuss my both these views in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are various measures to support my point of view . The first and major measure is that sports is such a thing by which people can fit their body. If a person will take part in sports , he will definitely keep fit or healthy. For instance, all people know kohli, he always always " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">remain healthy, because, he is a member of cricket team. Another measure is that people feel relief or relax due to the sports. A person can never feel lazy, who is the member of a sports team. A student is always keep fit. because, his school provides him to sports activities in which he can show his stamina and boost due to take part in these activities.
On the other hand, sports could have little effects. it is not beneficial for elder people . Sometimes, some old masses take part in those type of sports activities which they are not able to play and after that they can have heavy pain in their bodies . Thus, these activities are not activities are suitable for them. Moreover,some schools schools " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">provide those sports activities which are not for students and could have harmful effects of those.
To conclude, i believe that sports is more beneficial for all. Whereas others think it would have some effects. however, it is nothing like this.
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first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37261146497 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52773929406 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474522292994 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 78.2209031864 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7894736842 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152746466933 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587495965577 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621494175865 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118965304188 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423853583867 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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