Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.“
Bad results related to public health nowadays have raised many concerns. Some people suppose that only by supplying physical facilities, the government can completely solve this problem, whereas others possess the opposite view that the aforementioned measure is ineffective and other methods should be considered. In this essay, I’m going to protect some viewpoints that why I agree with the later.
First of all, the improvement in shipping and entertainment brings people more and more convenient life, which causes to health problems related to sedentary lifestyles, such as obesity. Besides, not everyone can afford the long-term member fee at lavish fitness clubs. So, it is evident that creating more open places where people can play sports for free, especially in crowded urbanizations gathering too many department blocks which are lack outdoor spaces, plays a crucial in improving public health.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that increasing sports amenities does not mean that the well-being of individuals is improved automatically. For instance, recent researches show that despite a large budget pouring on up-to-minute physical facilities, the percentages of people who suffered from bone and heart-attacked diseases stay increasing. Obviously, the government should be considered a group of complex methods including food safety, education for netizens’ awareness of workout and providing the medical policies.
To summarize, providing a variety of sports amenities is an effective but not only measure to protect public health and an overall campaign should be carried on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67634854772 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95141235149 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672199170124 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7919212137 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.8 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232418353334 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818607915265 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583076419895 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134521676994 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565205022966 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.