Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.
In 21st century, education is an important part of our life. However, some individuals believe that history is one of the preferred subject other than science and technology are beneficial. I would discuss the both views in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark on, some massive think that pupil should focus on historical subjects because its essential for increase the knowledge . To explicate it, student can ameliorate their skills about histories. Whereas they know that fear fighter like, Mahatma Gandhi, Pandit Jwallal Nehru, etcetra. Furthermore, subjects have a strong correlation. Nowadays competition is very high rather than one particular subject as well as learners get improved information about all subjects, ought its trend mostly people used to much technology at any work, suchas bank transactions, book tickets and education purposes.
To commence with, many massive agree teenagers should construe to all subjects and improved their grades . When youngsters are interesting to learn mathematics. Its used for daily basics goods to exemplify, pulses, vegetables,oils etcetera. Last but not list, learners cannot diversify their attention we gain their holistic growth and we use many technologies but computer used in many part of chores like learn many things and mathematic errors also.
To conclude, having pondered over above stated information it can be informed that, young people to more like to get benefits from concentrating on all subjects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ll subjects and improved their grades . When youngsters are interesting to learn mat...
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...learn many things and mathematic errors also. To conclude, having pondered over abo...
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...oncentrating on all subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63228699552 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86142846136 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.730941704036 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.6390524292 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237981191926 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730510784568 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778772941805 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144228362422 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106621968891 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.