Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
One of important part of every community without doubt is history and try to understand our their ancestors. History is one of inseparable part of our modern life which has vital rule on humans improvement. Nowadays the countless number of people and educational experts , argue with each other that : is it necessary to learn history on schools? Or students should concentrate on academic subjects such as science and technology? In this essay I will explore both ideas and give my opinion at the end of this essay.
Lest starts with history. Historians claim that without study in history , people couldn't achieve improvement in many branches. So study in our ancient generation , can achieve improvement in extended fields. For example if scientist never study their previous studies , they never invent various instruments which help human to become their life more easy than used to be .Although we can become experienced be many ways , but one of best way undoubtedly is explore history .In today's modern world , experienced people is really helpful for their community. For instance consider experienced politicians , they always ready to overcome with political problems which their country encounter with them and also make hard decisions.
Many developed countries have high-level experts in academic branches such as physics and mathematics. Many of people say that the schools should focus just on scientific and technological fields grow students academic ability to improve the level of engineering , economy and science of their country . Science and technology are important factors to develop our country , how ever they sometime have negative impact for instance invention of Atom Bombs. In other hand the scientific knowledge has vital rule on investigate our environment . For example if we don't know how use the wind power to produce energy , we can't store enough energy so the community encounter with many problems such as energy shortage.
To some up , However history is really helpful but many people think that the ministry of education , should eliminate it from educational schedule. I think history is necessary to learn in schools because it's our heritage and many people in past , try to show us , their wrong lanes in order to we avoid from them. I personally believe unless we don't study history , we can't achieve better and modern life than used to be .
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many peopie around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? 84
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21204188482 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73838626495 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539267015707 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3778730577 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.611111111 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205421224552 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641050653032 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043446604958 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129522126968 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047132419612 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.