Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and Technology are more than important than history.
discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people claim that history is necessary subject in the school while others think that both science and hi-tech are more essential than history in the modern world. Personally, i agree with this statements in this essay i will discuss two different sides and give my opinion about that.
On the one hand, history became a compulsory subject long time ago because to focus on what happen at the first time. In articular, it's mandatory for students from primary school to high school even university due to people who need to know about their origin, such as: how long the war between American and Vietnamese soldiers. In addition, it can create more promotion and motivation to encourage citizens in modern world developing themselves and their country. Furthermore, thanks to history, citizens can narrow the generation gap: draw inspiration and easily acess the new world.
On the other hand, when economy is more and more innovative with growth of science and technology, people, specially is students, tend to choose those to improve their skills. Actually, nowadays, technology gradually covers almost all of fields in the world, even among the fields requiring human skills like art or entertainment activities. Thus, it's understood easily if a majority of students concentrate on those. For instance, the number of students in college survey was recorded in 2018 that most of high school students decided enter the university by their point of science subjects reaching a peak at three fourths instead of history. Moreover, the figure of graduates after finishing your college in science field have more opportunity taking part in the big companies with high salary each month than others
In conclusion, for this reasons i mention above, i agree with this two statements because it sounds is reasonable. I believe that each individual have their own ability, importantly, they should choose the subject making them keen on to individual growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21518987342 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65057669231 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0913812948 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264573261321 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835300472796 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913691613655 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153501239681 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116198365204 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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