Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There has been a wide divergence of opinion on which subject, such as History, Science and Technology, is utmost importance in today’s school. While some opine that History should be mandatory, I hold that practical subjects related to Science and Technology are more necessary in our evolving world.
The main reason why students should study History at school is that not only does this subject teach them what their forefathers experienced and suffered in the past to make their countries what they are today, it also helps people know their own culture and the evolution of societies. Moreover, learn about the past often gives a glimpse of the future. To illustrate, the past world wars were the most devastating life incidents. Children need to be educated about these crucial events so that they will be well aware of the consequences and hopefully avoid any such situations in the future.
Although History should still be taught, Science and Technology should be prioritised because these are more likely to have an impact on a person’s future career. Very few students are projected to end up with careers in History, as historians or professors, but a large percentage will work in such fields as Economy or Technology. For example, in Vietnam, the most popular university majors are engineering, finance, and graphic design. Evidently, these majors might give students a head start on potential future career and increase their chances of having a higher standard of living, thereby promoting the economic growth of a country.
For the foregoing discussions, I would reiterate that school administrators should not remove History from the timetable, but they should devote more time and resources to the teaching of practical subjects to meet the needs of the future job market, especially the technology market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26101694915 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7928294938 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.514581907 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.090909091 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240554356712 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082818760119 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693846230333 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145829862358 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844293767519 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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