Some people say that the main environmental proble of ur time is the loss of particular
species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmenta;
problems.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the issues of the environment are ever-increasing that they should be tackled
immediately. It is commonly believed that losing particular pattern of flora and fauna
is chief problem, while others argue that we have to focus on more critical issues,
such as global warming and air degradation. In this essay, I will discuss both views
of argument and reach a conclusion.
Certain plants and animals which are on the verge, should be secured for several
reasons. Some supporters consider that the extinction of them will cause irreversible mistakes as these
species cannot be returned back to the nature. In addition, it has an influence on the diversity
of the nature which would be devoid of beauty. Tigers, for example, are included
in red book which means that they are in the risk of extinction, and our descendants will, to be sure,
miss a chance to watch these pleasant creatures. As for extinct ones, there is only possible way to
learn them is through books and films.
In contrast, some critics claims that there are more imperative problems in terms of the environment.
Having been important for the environment as well as human kind, flora and fauna continue to suffer unless other problems have been solved. There is an evidence that global warming is considered as the critical one of them that is to be addressed first. Another issue could be air pollution caused by greenhouse gases that the officials have to treat in order to avoid any unintended consequences toward people as a whole.
In conclusion, even though plants and animals are of vital importance for the nature, without solving the other issues the protection of the environment cannot be achieved. I believe that global warming and air degradation are relatively superior compared with flora and fauna.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, well, while, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12080536913 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72571645652 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6258007065 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143672691922 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492703834615 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480089491333 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0460876611552 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435647329304 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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