In the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.
It is undeniable that the development of the Internet has had a great influence on printed newspapers and books. While many people argue that printed products will die out and be replaced by online articles, I would agree that paper books and newspaper will still maintain their dominance in the future and in this essay, I will support my opinion with relevant examples.
Firstly, paper books help people to focus and concentrate. That is to say, holding a paper book on hand gives people the only choice of flipping pages to enjoy without any distraction. Meanwhile, reading online tempts people to visit websites, look up links and search for new books rather than focus on the book they are reading. For instance, the popularity of digital devices such as smartphones or tablets and online book means that people now can enjoy the book in the comfort of their own bedroom. However, for many avid readers, the idea of some quality reading time is to be alone in some quiet places like a library or a café, turn off their phone and devour the book they love.
Secondly, traditional prints have existed for a long time and have definitely been a huge part of human life. What I mean is that a variety of people, especially the elderly, can not get used to modern gadgets nowadays. Therefore, it may be much easier for them to update the news by reading the printed newspapers instead of trying to use technology devices.
In conclusion, although it is more convenient to read everything online, printed book and newspaper is vital in our life and irreplaceable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80442804428 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56531620092 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0240285156 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.363636364 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3636363636 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278601905834 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899690417618 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690992148829 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157139216002 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687100159883 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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