In the era of technology, we had left a bunch of things behind. In this essay we are going to share a few advantages and some disadvantages of modern communication technology that has effected social relationships.
We shall begin with, rise in mode of communication has shortened long distance and made socializing easy. One of the, highlighting feature came into existence is video calling and sharing images. For instance, if you have your relative staying abroad one can do video call or direct voice call, share instant images. However, growth in broadcast has some negative impact as well. Like wise, couples sharing nude pictures and unclothed video conversation which leads to threatening.
Furthermore, use of GPS has made us find any location on phone anytime. This has a negative impact as well, People spying on phone has become common. Equally, important updated disclosure has made us acquire knowledge on almost every topic. For example, you can search anything about a college, educational queries, health related questions, learn cooking, book a flight, train, a cab. Internet provide information that many books do not provide. In the same way, internet has spoiled many children indulged in gaming, watching porn, spending hours chatting on phones on social websites, updating every minute about what you are wearing, what you are eating, where you are going. Updating your information has resulted many people in disaster. Although, parents have implemented many primitive measures for slowdown.
Summarizing, I partially agree with people saying modern communication has some positive and negative effect on social relationships. Adapting some measure can help resolving the effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...tance and made socializing easy. One of the, highlighting feature came into existenc...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...ueries, health related questions, learn cooking, book a flight, train, a cab. Internet ...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to resolve' or 'resolve'.
Suggestion: to resolve; resolve
...onships. Adapting some measure can help resolving the effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44150943396 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85796184163 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664150943396 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6034430064 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8235294118 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315064965874 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832705263073 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102657729128 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19815335334 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104504021967 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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