Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that many people believe that shopping is easier than ever before, thanks to modern technology. While there are some reasons to support its benefits, I agree that high-tech shopping is more stressful and impersonal.
On the one hand, the option to use technology for shopping is beneficial to some extent. Firstly, online shopping has grown in popularity and expanded in developing and developed countries. This is because ordering products online makes you more convenient due to saving time and effort. For instance, when you arrive at the supermarket, you usually wait for parking or pay. But shopping online only requires a click of a mouse to order what you like. Another reason is the way of payment you transfer instead of paying in cash which can be dropped or robbed.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I believe the adverse effects of high-tech shopping. The main one relates to the elder, who does not often have access to mobile phones or pay by credit cash. And if the technology is completely replaced for sales, it will have fewer personal services for them. Furthermore, about online shopping, most people still prefer to handle fruits or vegetables or try on clothes. As the result, customers find it complicated to return defective goods or try on clothes.
In conclusion, while technology makes our lives easier and quicker, I still believe that it makes shopping harder because it cannot offer personal service or the physical opportunity to browse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99206349206 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61954059814 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6952758948 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144382117203 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478101029744 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051123886455 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989544135362 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555706819656 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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