Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is said that music is one of the most powerful connection people from different countries and ages around the world together. I completely agree with this statement.
melody and rhyme are things which can shorten the distance among people. when we attend a party or take part in an event, we may not know anyone in this party, however, when we sing a song together, we can easily make a conservation after. because music has rhyme and melody which can make people feel happy and likely to connect with others. music can be a great link people from one country together. For example, people in one country, despite belonging to different ethinity, all of us have to remember our nation athem.
music has a special function which is used to bring everyone together. Each of us is an independent person, however, we will have the same habbits or pastimes. Threfore, one of the most things we may have like each other is the genre of music, which is the important factor bringing us closer and closer in spite of the differences from cultures or ages. The lyrics of music is also the things make our distance shorter. this part of music can neither prevent us from the state of down in the dumps nor make us feel really sad.
In conclusion, music is one of the most wonderful creation in the world, which make border of people soften or stronger because of many factors in music. Therefore, we should listen to music in free time because in some periods of time, these songs can be good subjects in our daily life conversations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63003663004 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40133289165 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534798534799 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0551602296 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198761696872 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803226023678 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533910836253 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146496470274 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556500581919 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.