some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What thing that bringing individuals of different cultures and ages together is music. Although the proportion of people assert that it is inevitable and irreplaceable, It could be far-fetched to hold the view that others call into question this issue. I absolutely believe that music can bring people together owing to innumerable compelling reasons.
To begin with, the thing that is important for all people is music that the sounds and voices are the most rational justification issue that people focus on it. Indeed, the more people listen to music, the more may have a similar subject to discuss. A good illustration for this is people who have universal knowledge about music, and bring together to choose the first and foremost music in the world that it is called; "Grammy awards". It is crystal clear, wants to choose the best music, jury get together.
On the other hand, worthwhile is the chief aim of music that lays the groundwork to visit each other in the concert. In fact, let us take the example of different cultures and ages that could not be a fact of the matter that people rob themselves to joining o a concert. People, furthermore, may actually listen to music in ceremonies while discussing from up close revolving lyrics, sounds and etc.
It is crystal clear notwithstanding such positive affect, the figure of people who disagree with this statement are available.
To sum up, considering the point discussed above revolving around the concert, awards, and family gathering, my glowing tribute is: In no way do I disagree with the effect of music on people based on different cultures and ages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... choose the best music jury get together On the other hand worthwhile is the chie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, while, in fact, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86080586081 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66179666405 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516483516484 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 273.0 20.2975951904 1345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1327.0 106.682146367 1244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 273.0 20.7667163134 1315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 107.0 7.06120827912 1515% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425032010321 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.425032010321 0.084324248473 504% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229057705126 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623532541606 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 138.0 13.0946893788 1054% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -197.16 50.2224549098 -393% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 108.6 11.3001002004 961% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.39 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.53 8.58950901804 239% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 111.2 10.1190380762 1099% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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