Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music is an echo of emotions. Without music, the world would be flat. Music is extremely important for human happiness and gives us the spiritual and quintessential value of art. . Each ethnic group has a different culture and a different musical aesthetic. despite those differences, people can still understand the music of diverse cultures.
For a long time, music is the medium that can connect people's hearts in the easiest way. it is a way of expressing feelings of people in many different cultures around the world and at different ages. As we can see, music expresses the human soul. human emotions are conveyed by music, whether happy or sad, happy or miserable. music also shows an individual's personality through their musical preferences. Archaeological findings
show that different cultures around the world have always focused on their own particular instruments and ways of playing. despite the different musical backgrounds in many parts of the world, music seems to have only a common purpose, which is to bring people closer together. Almost every culture in the world has its own musical characteristics, the sound of the Australian Aboriginal didgeridoo flute reverberating through remote lands is different from the sound of a bustling festival of drums and bass. In some cultures, music is traditional or ceremonial, while in others, it expresses emotions or simply sets the stage for dance. despite these obvious differences in the concept of music, scientists have found evidence that the characteristics of music extend beyond the framework of different cultures and it’s role is ‘’language of the world’’. In a new study published in the journal Current Biology, psychologists present evidence that peoples coming from different country can easily identify the melody of a song and distinguish what kind of music it is, for example a lullaby or a dance song.. Through music, we communicate with others secretly and subtly about what makes us who we are and what we believe in a way that sometimes words cannot fully capture.
All in all, music has the role of a language, and hence has an impact on society. different peoples, speaking different languages as well as people from different ages can be connected by melodies. “Where words fail, music speaks..” Hans Chirstian Andersen said.
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...elodies. “Where words fail, music speaks..” Hans Chirstian Andersen said.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, still, well, while, for example, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.232 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92104104054 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549333333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.18301617 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286716445877 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936719273502 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545388236045 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190557184926 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324103681329 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.