Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...er apart from being different in culture , age and sometimes language I agree with...
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...s language I agree with them immediately . music is not just something that you he...
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Suggestion: Music
...anguage I agree with them immediately . music is not just something that you hear wit...
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...t something that you hear with your ears , its something that feel deep down in yo...
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...mething that feel deep down in your soul , moves all your senses disconnect you fr...
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...e who shares the same music taste as you . when you go to any music concerts you w...
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...ho shares the same music taste as you . when you go to any music concerts you will f...
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...ifferent people there different in looks , culture and ages , different in a lot o...
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...re different in looks , culture and ages , different in a lot of things but their ...
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...in a lot of things but their music taste , traveling from around the world just to...
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...this moment with these random supporters . sometimes it uint them like there were ...
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Suggestion: Sometimes
...s moment with these random supporters . sometimes it uint them like there were related to...
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...em like there were related to each other . the only dark side of this loyalty is t...
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...like there were related to each other . the only dark side of this loyalty is that ...
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...d to care alittl bit more that the usual , start to attacking who don’t like what ...
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...e what they like and force them in to it . what you like about music is that can t...
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...hat they like and force them in to it . what you like about music is that can tell y...
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...at can tell you about other people souls , souls that you may never find around yo...
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...souls that you may never find around you , a close friends sitting with each other...
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... the moon light with your lovd ones both listinnig to first song that you danced ...
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...stinnig to first song that you danced to , the song that connected you to your sou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, really, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51898734177 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05601131799 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540084388186 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.6079959464 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.5 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330810298934 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167745818097 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102326288919 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330810298934 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 11.3001002004 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.