some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is a common belief that music can help individuals from diverse cultures and ages to become close with each other. I completely agree with this view for several reasons.
One advantage given to support my opinion is that music helps people to connect relationships with all of ages. For example, a mom can connect with a baby when it was not born though music. As a result, the baby will have a healthy mind and a good development. Mother and baby will become close-knit thanks to music .This is why i think that music is of great significance in relationships
Another rationale behind my belief is that music can make individuals feel better due to soft or vibrant melodies. This helps to bring groups of music lovers from different cultures together. For example, BlackPink’s music show called Born Pink draw people’s attention around the world. Many people buy some tickets to listen and relax this phenomenon with each other due to catchy tunes and the good voices of the band members.
For this reasons, i believe that music helps to close cultures in the world.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that music plays a crucial role in connecting different cultures and ages together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88725490196 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61562215137 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563725490196 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9952063818 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301284737018 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120676227582 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046737246813 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167641452421 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417840178761 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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