Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays the power and influence of music have altered into something that is indispensable, although some may argue, I believe that it has affected us massively, but in a good way.
Jazz is considered as a popular selection, especially in musicals, but one of the facts came out surprising to me.
Traveling back in time in the US it was simply an option for leisure, mainly for black people. Although there were numerous singers with an outstanding voice, they weren’t respected nor acknowledged, just by their skin color.
A couple of years after, music has started to spread steadily in other foreign countries, which led to more attention.
Even though we might not be able to understand due to a lack of knowledge in different languages, it can still be a great and efficient way to communicate with other peers, despite your differences.
For example, you can learn about the aboriginal culture by watching them play instruments at the flying fish festivals where they would hold a celebration and also pray for a splendid harvest and safety.
Elders can also see at this opportunity to be closer with younger generations too.
Despite their ages, they might want to keep up with the new trend, by listening to music that their grandchildren might be fond of.
Based on the similarities and topics they have in common, I believe can decrease the gap between the two, and possibly might blend into something special.
Overall, the power of music can be a strong use to understand and embrace diversity, better communication, and thus, the opportunity to fully express yourself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 25, column 45, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...all, the power of music can be a strong use to understand and embrace diversity, be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07518796992 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87916915359 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65037593985 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4241229326 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.727272727 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103818424599 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357050860364 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306576425578 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385323430759 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303299275758 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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