Some people say that no one should work after the age of 65, others say that anyone should be able to continue working for as long as they wish. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that people must be retired from their job after the age of 65, while others believe that people can work until they can do so. However, in my opinion, it would be better for the elderly and the upcoming generations that people stop working at 65 years old.
On the one hand, people believe the age 65 is the off-work age due to the health consequences and indeed the continuation of the rest period. Many problems arise in people past the age of 60 such as cardiovascular problems and some psychological issues like memory loss, dementia, and Alzheimer's disease. Therefore people may not able to cope with the work and loss productivity to some extent. Furthermore, if people continued to work may lead to the unemployment of youngsters, and in turn robbery, theft, and such kind of malpractice would rise in the country. Similarly, most advanced technology might not indulge the elders however it would be most suitable to the new generations.
On the other hand, many others think old age people could work as much as they can without the age barrier. Some professions or workplaces like politics often need elders as leaders. Opinions and advice may lead to a higher level of success in a particular field. Along with that, people who fit in the age of 65 may feel depression or isolation due to involuntary retirement. The hectic lifestyle of today often indirectly affects people's minds and family lives if they are at the home always. However, this can be tackled by support groups or social clubs. Elders can be engaged in social services, gardening, and another sort of activities to get rid of their boredom. Giving space to youngsters would increase the overall well-being of the nation in the long run.
To conclude, even though it would be difficult for people who can work at the age of 65 to became exit the job. Nevertheless, it is good for the community and forthcoming generations to settle in we'll manner if they got enough space and work opportunities and elders can have enough rest and be free from stressful work life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...loss, dementia, and Alzheimers disease. Therefore people may not able to cope with the wo...
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Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...nd family lives if they are at the home always. However, this can be tackled by suppor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, kind of, sort of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78212290503 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69459126246 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539106145251 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6677781104 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.705882353 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312089756519 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101224636978 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066889608195 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209830623925 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284618809328 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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