Some people say that nowadays there is less communication between family members. Do you agree or disagree
In this fast moving world, fetching time in order to spend with our family has become the hardest part. I tend to feel that in recent times, the relationship between the friends and relatives has been fading due to the lack of communication.
Firstly, the distancing relationship and decreasing communication is founded to be the result of tremendous technological development by which people tend to spend a lot of time engaging themselves online especially in social media. This innovative development has made people inactive physically with their sorroundings. A recent study has shown that three-fourth of the young adults are spending more time online which lessened their verbal communication.
Secondly, the challenging responsibilities of the family members made them engaged with their sedentary jobs which in turn resulted in spending no time with their children. Furthermore the same pattern is replicated for the older people. The increasing change in demographic situation of the society has introduced strangers for Tak ng care of children to whom they feel hesitant to talk to.
Thirdly, the prevailing society has forced people to live an elite life because of which they are forced to value things than human feelings.
Finally ,the importance given to the family has been decreasing due to various factors because of which there is a lack of communication . People should develop a strong bond with their family which is possible only with the improved communication and exchange of their emotions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39583333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0246657358 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0153454847 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.727272727 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110020173506 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420383329205 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318671214305 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618971110079 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032164159273 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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