It is often considered change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of the change overweigh the disadvantages
In this technology driven world, the new innovations and alternatives in various fields are warmly welcomed by the people. The general view about this is considered to be more fruitful when compared to the scenario of neglecting it.
To support with, people prefer changes in their business, environment and also in culture. Changes which supports or simplify the work of the people are encouraged and followed by most of the people. Changes like modern outfits are inevitable and unavoidable in working atmosphere.Innovative technologies have lessened the physical work by saving more time and energy. The revolution of the freedom fighters destryed the class divisions and brought equality and brought a massive change in the society . Furthermore, changes in the academics according to the modern world help students to acquire knowledge unlike the ancient period where students only had to rely on a person.
However, Digitalization provides adequate sources for the crimes to occur contradictory to the olden days where privacy was maintained seriously. The changes occurring in the culture has resulted in fading of one’s own culture and tradition which might end in vanishing of that culture. Moreover, technological development has replaced humans and made people inactive reducing their intellectual ability to work efficiently on their own. It has reduced their persistence to search anything which resembles in their lives by which they fail to understand the importance of patience.
To conclude with, there are changes that has altered the way of thinking of the people and brought various positive outcomes and made life easier. Although it has so many benefits, when exercised exceedingly, it might end with loosing of values and significance of the tradition and most importantly has increased the risk of one’s own life. It should be practiced properly with limitations so that it would be useful for an individual and the society.
- With the development of social media more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations What solutions can you suggest to deal with their 78
- Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools Others however believe that boys and girls benefit more from mixed schools Discuss both these views and give your opinion 73
- It is often considered change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same Do you think the advantages of the change overweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some people say that nowadays there is less communication between family members Do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people feel that history is of little use others feel that history is important as it will help us in the present Do you agree or disagree 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40196078431 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01354516229 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6881319894 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148021227829 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519118368101 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475441143082 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785755622755 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556140922266 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.