Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the world, all countries have their own mother tongue for communicating with each other and learning those languages by people of different countries have made it possible for them to travel and work in the foreign land. It is considered by some people that reason behind learning different languages have only contributed in travelling and working in foreign country. From my point of view, there are many reasons that have helped people of different countries to be globally connected by knowing different languages.
To begin with, the first part of question says that foreign language have contributed people to travel around the world and find job opportunities in foreign land. Similarly ,knowing different languages have helped people in communicating with each other and knowing the culture, traditions of a particular country while visiting different places. On the other hand, knowing the different languages have also created large job opportunities globally.
However, there are many reasons as well as benefits of learning languages . Some of the reasons are in order to translate the books,articles,news,speech written or done in foreign , to become a translator and work as government officials. Similarly, it also great contribution in establishing multinational companies worldwide. In addition, foreign languages have helped many immigrants who have migrated from one country to other country.
In the conclusion , there are many benefits of learning different languages which help people in being globally acceptable. In my opinion ,nowadays, the rate of people travelling to different countries, migrating from one place to another for employment and studies have been increasing .So, in the present context, many people are interested in learning foreign languages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, similarly, so, well, while, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61254612546 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17745744494 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490774907749 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4256190399 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310359551405 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138958101648 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10304152181 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208240654647 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576847548913 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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