Some people says that music is a good way of bringing peple of different cultures and ages together
do you agree or disagree
It is thought by many people that music has the strong power to connect people, regardless of their cultural backgrounds and their ages. I completely agree with this point of view and the reason for this will be discussed as follow.
The first reason why I agree is that I’m sure music music can bring people from different cultural and countries together. What I mean by this is even though people can’t understand another Take me as an example, I’m really into k-pop songs and even though people may not understand another culture, they still understand the messages of music. The best example of this would be BTS- a k-pop group. BTS has a huge of following and very famous for catchy tune and speacially meaning lyrics. Their songs can express feeling of love and sympathy. Peole around the world who wacthed them may shed the tear while listening their melancholic piece of music. This is clear evident that music is universal language that transcends all cutural boudaries.
In addition to the reason above, I also believe music has ability to connect people from different generation. Regardless of age, we all enjoy memorable melody, a strong rhythm or a great vioce and the best songs have magical effects on all of us. That could explain why music program such as the voice, VN ídol are prime-time shows. These programmes attract many audiences from all ages because singing can appeal children, grandparents, parents alike. And I believe this form of entertaiment can bring families together.
In conclusion, I completely agree that music could bring people togethẻ because created shared experiences between people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, really, so, still, while, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05904059041 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51766001418 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0493469971 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206528035391 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068297576882 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762502372391 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139048999422 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399842240339 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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