What are some of the reason for poverty? What can we do to help the poor?
In many countries, there a lot of people are living below the poverty line.The are many reason behind the issue but every country has different ways of solving this problem.
The first reason for poverty is because of the vicious cycle of poverty. People lived in extremely poverty often struggle to put food on table and they like to live paycheck to paycheck and have to face acute food shortages.Another reason for this problem is that the poor have fewer opportunities in order to move ahead in life. Take children living in poverty as an example most of them are lack of education. And this might be because their parents can not afford school fees or some improvershied families need their children to work. So the poor children do not have a chance to approach with education as well as finding a better job in the future.
To help the needy person, there are several things government and public can do. One of them is that inviting donations from the public. With this way, their miserable life could be supported in part such as do not have to go to bed hungry. Instead of giving money, public could also create job opportunities for them. In terms of government, they should provide free education for poor children. These people should awarded a schoolarship for higher studies to encourage them in studies.
To sum up, many countries have poverty issue for many reasons. However, there are several things that government and public could do to resolve the issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78515625 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52912417967 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2497386753 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223245476227 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754597264273 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461181703416 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123389668676 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462003951945 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.