Some people students in school learn better when they study in group, others say school students study better when they are on their own. Discuss both views and give your oppinion.
There has been a discussion about the best study method for students in school. While some people say that studying with friends is useful, I agrue that self-learning may bring various positive effects to students
On the one hand, study group could bring many various impaction to student. Firstly, this way enable student to share knowledge with others, at the same time, they also gain new information and experience from their partner. Sencondly, via study group, the communication skills can be improved quickly because they have the chance to contact with different people. However, in some cases, negative attitude of the lack of awareness member could effects the ability of everyone in the group. For example, with a difficult assignment to complete within tight deadline, it is easy to lose motivation when one of members gives up.
On the other hand. There are both advantages and disadvantages which are caused by self-learning .Firstly, it can not dennied the advantage which self-learning bring. When studying lonely in a silence space, student can focus easier to solve their task because they may be disturbed by the noisiness from around. Secondly, it is convenient study way. The evidence for this position is that student can learn whenever and wherever they want such as in the park, in the bus, and so on. However, this way can cause unwanted effects if the student do not have consciousness, not stick to plan. It is hard to achieve desired purpose.
In conclusion, both of 2 methods have their advantages and disadvantages. Student should consider and make choice which is appropriate with him or her.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08208955224 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72855864903 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6730697708 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336574968877 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098170609533 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665510724324 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197168432502 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725819584758 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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