Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
What subject university students should be allowed to study continues to be controversial. While some people argue that it is better for students to choose subject areas that are valuable in the future, I believe that everyone should be at the liberty to pursue the major of their choice.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people opine that universities should restrict students to certain key subject areas. The main reason is the future employability of graduates. It can be argued that university courses like science and technology will not only open up a variety of job opportunities but also improve their career prospects. Another reason is because of future long-term economic growth, government investments in innovation are at new heights. Particular university subjects, therefore, seem likely within the context of current societal values, assuring greater future prosperity.
On the other hand, a section of society argues that students should be free to choose a field of study that they are passionate about. To begin with, if forced to study an unwanted major, students cannot best cultivate their aptitudes and give/deliver satisfactory academic performance. Even worse, some withdraw from their studies without earning a degree, and it is a complete waste of time and money. Furthermore, if employees are pressurised to do a job not related to their preferred areas of study, it would produce undesirable outcomes, especially resentment and negative attitudes at work. Also, it is difficult for employers to prevent job-hopping and reduce employee turnover. Finally, nobody can really predict which areas of knowledge will be highly demanding in the future because the world is growing and changing at a rapid pace. Industries that are relevant today may be gone tomorrow and replaced with entirely new fields of work.
In conclusion, while it may seem sensible to force students to study subjects that are currently viewed as useful, I prefer the current system in which people should be entitled to pursue the course of their choice.
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- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and gi 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to subject'
Suggestion: to subject
...hat it is better for students to choose subject areas that are valuable in the future, ...
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Line 9, column 161, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
...sionate about. To begin with, if forced to study an unwanted major, students cannot best...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, really, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32121212121 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80211287198 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4839839103 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.066666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335728979934 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106106450551 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10559819506 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217022237392 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822351054535 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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