As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people hold the view that apart from generating profits, enterprises should have social obligations. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should contribute more to society than simply make money.
On the one hand, it is justifiable that companies should focus on the priority of making money. Earning a profit is important to a business because profitability impacts whether a company can secure financing from a bank, attract investors to fund its operations and grow its business. Moreover, if companies want to get ahead of their competitors and to meet the changing needs of customers, they need to invest more in research and development. This is not to mention marketing budgets used to improve brand awareness and to reinforce brand identity in customers’ minds. Therefore, only if a company survives in a competitive world can it make a positive contribution to society.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why companies should not operate solely for profit. One social responsibility that owners have is to pay tax on their income instead of exploiting tax loopholes to maximize profits as a way to contribute to society. Second, since many business operations have been damaging the fragile environment such as the disposal of untreated industrial waste in bodies of water, they should work towards a zero environmental footprint. For example, they could install water treatment systems to remove impurities from wastewater before they reach aquifers or rivers. Finally, corporations should engage in philanthropic pursuits helping the less fortunate, which will project more attractive images to both consumers and shareholders alike.
In conclusion, I believe that companies should give equal emphasis on financial objectives and social responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.559566787 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09720783496 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646209386282 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2488114476 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13328660339 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490281860728 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511834249291 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962497710952 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516186753342 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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