Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be used in the future, such as those related to Science and Technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the contemporary society, every new graduate is of beyond capability in order to take chances. When it comes to education, it is believed that college students are suggested to get freedom in choosing subjects, while those thinking that they are forced to catch the future trending with some certain majors in purpose. This topic will be clarified through my thought.
On the one hand, learners should be educated personally so that they succeed in bringing effectiveness. The expectation can only be found when they are put in the right box. Like each person should join volleyball training class is their major rather than Chemistry. Furthermore, their prospect in that would be brighter.
On the other hand, school should provide only essential subjects for everyone. The world is developing speedily which can leave the old things behind so the restriction is forcely considered. People with IT or languages degrees have always been promising candidates. In such a context, there is no discussion in acceptable incomes and convenient life.
In conclusion, my firm conviction is that there should be a softer regulation in applying for the like of students. The mission is advancing every part of improvement but without getting rid of other fields.
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- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be used in the future such as those related to Science and Technology Discuss both these views and g 56
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to Science or technology Discuss both these views and give yo 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2315270936 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82054873364 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679802955665 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.677402956 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6923076923 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2923724354 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823729106846 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560172473529 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146693874469 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03845825844 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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