Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
In recent years, young generation has tended to learn a great deal of favorite subjects but it is not suitable and convenient in the future. Therefore, I am convinced tertiary-level students should choose the right way to follow the useful fields becauce of some reasons.
Nowadays, people must affort a lot finance problems to get high salary and better positions. that why much more parents want their children to study many helpful things such as Science and Technology to ensure them will have the high-paying jobs. For instance, a great many famous jobs such as International laws, Logicstics, I.T, etc, usually have better salary than others. Moreover, university students who study useful subjects, do not have to be worried about unemployed issues. because they certainly have good jobs. Then, they can pay for their recharging the battery like travelling, eating, drinking, even improving themselves,etc. Besides that, the opportunities for promotion is more than. Perhaps the more useful subjects are, the more demand is. Hence, after intially time, they will reduce their stress a lot. Despite aforementioned advantages, that way still has a little bit problem. If students run to study useful subjects that means they do not have excitement and enthusiasm into. So they will easily loss of creatives and positive thinking.
On the other hand, having chosen enjoying subjects, tertiary-level students have less stressed than. Cause they put passion and enthusiasm into. Furthermore, they can have opportunities to improve both their thinking and creatives.But they certainly face to be out of work and lead to lack of money. And they are not enough ability to raise their family or even themselves. Finally, the hobbies sometimes just like temporary.Therefore, they have to think carefully while giving the decisions.
In conclusion, although a great many students do not likely study useful subjects, they have to continue because of finance.But in my perspective, students should study those.Despite negative feeling initially, it can solve their problems in life.So i believe that it will become their favorite fields in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37982195846 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94148362205 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596439169139 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.3696892362 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.65 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325786668492 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866215392084 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640314950479 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186170960043 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547530726593 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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