Some people think that art should be necessary in schools while others say that it is unuseful.discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this ongoing epoch, there is need to upgrade artistic skills among the children. However some people opine that creative subjects are fruitful for students while others assert that it is useless subject. According to my opinion, I firmly stand by the former view which I would presented ahead with my arguments.
To begin with, it might be proved worthwhile for pupils. Since, art develop a skill of show hidden talent infront of others. To elaborate it, the most of children have ability to make paintings, portraits and so on and art and craft is the best way to share experience with everyone. To cite an example, studies consistently believes that many individuals get a job in the field of art classes like paintings, dance, music and many more. Furthermore, art activities help scholars to sharpen their mind and make them more creative. To be more precise, creativity does not have an end point, one can draw anything from it's own thoughts to express feelings towards others.
On the other hand, opponents who believes that it is not useful academic subject for little ones. Firstly, technology will probably increase I upcoming time. Many parents know this and believe it is extremely important that schools focus primarily on academics, as their children will get highly succeed in the world. What is more, students are busy in hectic schedule in other difficult subjects, because they think that in art field they would never get an employment with high salary. So, it may be create herculean tasks for pupils future.
To conclude, although creative subjects brings some negative effects on scholars. However, I still agree that art and craft is one of the essential subject due to its advantages which makes it more unique rather than offering some deleterious aftermaths.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ade artistic skills among the children. However some people opine that creative subject...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'present'
Suggestion: present
... stand by the former view which I would presented ahead with my arguments. To begin ...
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Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... might be proved worthwhile for pupils. Since, art develop a skill of show hidden tal...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...infront of others. To elaborate it, the most of children have ability to make paintings, portrai...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom its own thoughts to express feelings towards others. On the other hand,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts to express feelings towards others. On the other hand, opponents who believ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, while, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05387205387 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55049116019 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653198653199 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3233722456 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150513220433 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427027021206 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305264637569 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872643267244 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243653791687 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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