Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although some people assume increasing the legal age for driving or riding as a best way to reduce road accident but people have different views about whether the age has sufficient effect on the mentioned issue to be prominent of the effective parameters. Personally, I believe that it can have a minor effect and other elements like education, supervision and so on are more important rather than age.
To begin with, it seems education is one of the most important item which has a significant role to diminish road accident and it is not deniable. Of course, it should be presented in a right way and continuously. For example there are a lot evidence that prove that the effect of driving educational announce by the Medias like radio and TV.
Supervision as a second item will have big effect to increase road safety. For instance, using the speed cameras especially in the dangerous roads will be led to reduction of risks because of direct relation of speed and accidents. Moreover, using other tools such as GPS in order to driver's activity observation will be useful.
Finally, the quality of cars, bikes and roads should be considered as a drastically important factor. In the other words, any failure or defects in the vehicles or the roads may be equals to serious repercussion regardless of driver's age. As a clear example, if the brakes of car or bike fail, a driver with higher age cannot control the vehicle as the younger one.
On the other hand, the people that believe the minimum age for driving should be increased may refer to the calmer and less excitement of older people which is not deniable but it seems to have a lower effect in comparison with other mentioned factors.
In conclusion, while I do not refute the effect of increasing the minimum age for driving completely, I believe that it is not the best way to increase road safety and other parameters have more effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Line 2, column 181, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...able. Of course, it should be presented in a right way and continuously. For example there are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77643504532 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66260000003 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507552870091 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8406298508 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.615384615 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285817664853 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982299348135 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107184824366 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163402851613 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103447961607 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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