when a person convicted with a jury it means that s/he has a mistake that led to injuring society or other persons. so it seems reasonable that is forced to pay the charge of it . some people believe for punishment prisoners should do nonprofit works instead of only rest in prison. besides that, it gives them the opportunity to learn new skills.
the governments in all over the world try to decrease their charge and use source and workforce to cover it . an educational purpose is to breeding good civilization that not act against community .it is obvious that a conviction destroy a low that have bad effect on others, for example we may drink alcohol and our driving led to an accident .then we created a problem that must paid with governments that are not faithful .work in bars help to better running these institute because they can earn money from prisoners job .
sometimes the poverty led to crime .a person that not find a job for obtaining to the basic needs incourage to do dangerous activities such as steel. the prison time gives this chance to obtain new skeel and after you finish this period be able to find a good job in society .furthermore they are busy and not need to think about a new method of crime.
in conclusion, it was shown that unpaid work can be a good suggestion for the prison period. it helps member for learn new things and future help them to change their life .beside that with seles their products, a government able to better manage prisons.
- do you agree or disagree?all university student should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is 68
- A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject. 84
- Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bars .To what extent do you agree ? 61
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What measures do you think might be effective? 56
- Homework is a part of school life Many people feel that giving homework daily to school children works well for them while some feel it is an unnecessary burden on them What do you think about it Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examp 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59022556391 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46399705589 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.5273566072 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.1 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172984293005 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655991815152 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914830827801 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980080481655 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391403974221 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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