do you agree or disagree?
all university student should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is
the history of any nation could be one of the attractive things that all of us need to know.t he roots and all of our traditions and cultures return to the history .some people believed that all university students without considering their field must take history courses. I definitely agree with that because we need to have a sense of belong to a land and people on it. study of history could help us for this propose.
first, it seems critical to know about the common history and experience if we want to be unit community .for example imagine a group of persons that collected in a place without any shared interest, with different language and ect .it cannot lead to strong relationship between them but a history that all society know about it could be as a stick to stand members beside each other’s and give them the sense of nation.
more of things we currently witness in our political and social life occurred in past too. so it can be easy to learn from them and not need to experience them again .when you be aware of how enemies try to dominant your nation it will be easy to aware people about different plan of them by remembering the past experience for your country.for example in 200 years ago the government of my country trusted other foreign countries for help them to improve the trade of country and this lead to so bad economic condition at that period.
one of best things that allow you to have honor about your nation is the champion and big persons you find in the history of your country .for instance all of us Iranian person have good sense when hearing about the king Kouras. he was before 2500 years ago. so great person that success to be king half of the world and give freedom to many of people .the brave and justice of him is popular yet in all over the world and we honor that be a generation of such big person.
in conclusion, it was shown that study of history could provide us the past experience and aware about different risks before existed .and, on the other hand, know about a common history make unite a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50131926121 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32103305965 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490765171504 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.21667772 48.9658058833 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.6 100.406767564 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.9 20.6045352989 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179157928049 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729565155007 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715526587357 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107190945514 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747235301756 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 11.7677419355 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.