Some people think that charity organization should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Humanitarian organization are key to uplift the living standards of people life. Therefore, some people claim that they should help people their own province first, whereas for others needy individuals should be at top priority. This essay intends to elaborate both sentiments followed by my personal opinion.
There are many reasons why some individuals argue that own country's citizens should benefited first, among them most obvious one is directly target to problems of own country. In other words, many criminals fulfil their fundamentals requirements by doing negative things such as robbery, blackmailing, so in result, criminal rates can be alleviated by providing help them. By helping to nearest ones one organisation can also check whether their resources are utilised in right manner or not.
Those who are in favour of helping to needy ones only believe that such activity can play a vital role in global issue mitigation. This means that some countries still failed to fulfil basic necessity of their citizens, for such nations these organization prove to be light in that darkness. Many organization, for instance, directly funded needy nations. Motivation towards humanity is also more compelling feature of this strategy, as we all are same creatures of this planet, so help is not discriminated by just province boundries.
I believe that charities should provide resources to people who needs them most rather than nationality because in developed country a person at lowest class has basic amenities and person from developing country feels deprived of such facilities.
In conclusion, yet aid to nearest ones is advantageous in some extent, I think helping company should provide resources to the most suitable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...laborate both sentiments followed by my personal opinion. There are many reasons why some ind...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the nearest'.
Suggestion: to the nearest
...ated by providing help them. By helping to nearest ones one organisation can also check wh...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this organization' or 'these organizations'?
Suggestion: this organization; these organizations
...ity of their citizens, for such nations these organization prove to be light in that darkness. Man...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun organization seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many organizations'.
Suggestion: Many organizations
...ion prove to be light in that darkness. Many organization, for instance, directly funded needy na...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the nearest'.
Suggestion: to the nearest
...h facilities. In conclusion, yet aid to nearest ones is advantageous in some extent, I ...
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Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...provide resources to the most suitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, as for, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41544117647 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81435924705 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1019541918 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304492160605 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10201520391 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850099978925 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167932804706 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978496031507 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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