Companies use different ways to increase sales. What different ways do companies use to increase sales? What is the most effective?
It is true that some organizations use variety different ways earn their profit through increase sales. There are some certain ways that companies can use and one of the most productive is advertising in networks
Some companies use the method that provide a sales promotion for the custormers. Addtionally, companies may offer discounts in a certain day to attracts people to buy their good. Furthermore, some companies are make a deal with famous people as they will be a face of their brands. For example, Jisoo, the famous singer from South Korean is the face of Gucci, leads to her fans will buy it just because they want to be like their idol, or just supports for her.
Although there are variety of ways that companies can increase sales, advertising in social media is the most effective and can bring huge benefits for the companies. In terms of modern lifestyle, people use their technology such as mobile phone or laptop as the needs that they can loss and the internet is all around us. In doing so, corporations can use that trends as a benefits to advertising their product on social media or apps buyer to access more custormers includes global buyers. Take tiktok app for an example, some companies pay a huge money for KOL, the people known as influencer to young people and who use that apps, to review their products, leads to increase the truth in customers and they will buy it.
In conclusion, there are a lot of ways to access to customers to boost sales for the companies, and advertising is one of the productive methods to acheive that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a benefit' or simply 'benefits'?
Suggestion: a benefit; benefits
...so, corporations can use that trends as a benefits to advertising their product on social ...
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Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge money'.
Suggestion: huge money
... app for an example, some companies pay a huge money for KOL, the people known as influencer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74817518248 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57150135379 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1368447988 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.1 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274144255407 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117875314478 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952734160997 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182081878048 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966599039147 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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