Some people think that children’s free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time. What is your opinion?
Children always bear the hope of the development of a generation, which leads to the fact that they get attention a lot during their growing up. A majority suppose that children should do some educational activities when they are free to aim to use time effectively. Personally, this mention is correct to a great extent because it affects children’s lives considerably.
The first is that children should be well educated since they were in the early years of school. As they are young and their brains are willing to take in new information, it must be nice to teach them through activities or games related to education. Parents can be sure that their children are getting an education every single minute even when they do not have time to check. Without a doubt, educational activities will never disappoint their expectations.
The second is that children easily be given in to the temptation of video games which includes violent or meaningless content. Somehow video games are much more appealing than studying in their points of view. Inevitably they are addicted to video games and ignore things around, which triggers numerous advert consequences. All of the above, the most obvious result is spoiling their eyes.
The last is that every activity or game must have a particular purpose to help the players. For example, to learn vocabulary, to practice response-ability, etc. It is unuseful as it ends up with the only objective of relaxing. Children will waste their time regardless of their ages when they have the best capacity to study.
Children inherently have fresh brains to put in beneficial facts, to get rid of being addicted to video games, and they should make use of time for studying. For those reasons, I prefer the fact that children should do educational activities in their free time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'supposes'.
Suggestion: supposes
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
... triggers numerous advert consequences. All of the above, the most obvious result is spoil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, well, for example, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99013157895 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76764790272 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559210526316 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5346872018 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2352941176 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363075031156 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114921161923 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959169187093 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207596405673 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694550117786 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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