Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
Regarding the nurturing process of children, some parents think that their education ought to start early, while others opine that education should not begin after the age of seven. This essay will shed light on boths views as well as present my opinion.
On the one hand, it stands to reason that a number of parents advocate the presence of the minimum education age. By the time a child turns seven, he is anticipated to develop physically and mentally to receive proper schooling. As a matter of fact, children’s brains and cognitive skills develop in proportion to their age; therefore, a seven-year-old is believed to be able to adapt more efficiently to a scholastic environment. Furthermore, at the age of seven, an improved immune system has given rise to increased susceptibility to frequent illnesses. As a result, the process of gaining academic knowledge is less likely to be disrupted by sick leave.
On the other hand, I am in favour of early childhood education owing to the numerous benefits it offers. Firstly, it should be noted that education is a broad term which refers to the absorption of knowledge through instructions. In other words, beside professional educators, parents and family members can also teach children a wealth of values at an early stage. It is common knowledge that children lack the ability to distinguish what is right and wrong; therefore, parents play a vital role in reinforcing such essential moral values in children from the earliest stages. Additionally, early instruction assists in the recognition of endowed talents. Some children may be regarded as infant prodigies due to outstanding performances in such aspects as music, art and literacy. Only by early education in childhood can such fundamental potentials come to light and be fostered to achieve expertise and mastery in the future.
In conclusion, I personally attach greater importance to early childhood development when putting the necessity of imparting moral values and the recognition of children’s aptitude into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25609756098 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02293311673 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4324823167 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.933333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1333333333 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247129105383 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668654247652 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624602374233 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138721025137 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873780347159 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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