Some people say that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others insist that there should be no regulation to design buildings. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Building design is now one of the most controversial issues that people like debating about. The affirmatives insist that governments play an important role in the control of structure regulation. However, the negatives say that people have right to build whatever they need. In this essay, I will address both views as well as suggest supportive ideas based on knowledge and experience.
Firstly, I comprehend that the gap between the positive side and the negative side because all everyone deserve that to decorate and to construct their property. But the thing is that without basic standards are not allowed to overcrowd that's why the law is function of regulate in a positive way. If the governments let all companies build their needs, big cities may well surrounded by congestion with huge population.
Secondly, some people occupy other's private property in order to construct their benefits. In this case, we should restrict everything by law. Some regulation is needed for peace because of the situation unless it should not go too far.
Thirdly, one of my relatives were planning to buy an apartment for investment. After that, the apt price was fluctuated by the right of view. The apartment was planning to make surrounded by spectacular landscape ,but the corporate had changed their plan without any notice to tenant. The company said government did not give permission to build. There were some reasons that if the building was built as soon as they can. Also, the gap between other buildings could be cramped so it caused private invasion.
In conclusion, governments affect constantly numerous effects on market price such as real estate. So governments and dweller should work together to make new regulation. Because it is very sensitive problem between private and public.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: and
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Suggestion: that's
... standards are not allowed to overcrowd thats why the law is function of regulate in ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ats why the law is function of regulate in a positive way. If the governments let all companies b...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...make surrounded by spectacular landscape ,but the corporate had changed their plan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18835616438 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73472788953 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633561643836 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0187636308 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.7368421053 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223280903546 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565744018237 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406575125045 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105888097933 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552578819648 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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