Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided as to whether the economic expansion of a developing country should be based on direct financial assistance from international conglomerates or the emphasis ought to be placed on indirect help such as advice. Although the indirect support could be beneficial to a certain extent, direct funding into an economy would be of greater benefit to developing countries.
some assume that a country’s economy could benefit greatly from professional help and consultancies. Such line of argument is predicated on that fact many poor countries do not receive adequate support from local high-quality consultants and economists, as the local education and training are often not only limited in capability but also persistently underinvested. Therefore, were there valuable pieces of advice in terms of economic activities, a country would achieve an autonomous economic expansion in the future. Such economic achievements could be made possible, due to the ability to select the way of development that is deemed suited to a nation’s distinct economic features and contextual factors, such as a geographic position or local resources.
However, it is argued that international monetary assistance can directly facilitate the economic development of a third-world nation. Generally, most of developing countries are in dire need of substantial finances, as there are always a number of adverse factors such as shortages of major infrastructure, conflicts and poor financial management that consistently hinder their economic growth. Consequently, if there is sufficient and direct financial support from international communities, it is likely that such setbacks could be alleviated with discernible efficacy. For example, funds in the form of direct investments into a country’s road infrastructure would be of great utility in increasing the volume of shipping, hence promoting the speed of transactions and then the overall economic performance.
In conclusion, valuable support from oversea consultants can help effect sustainable economic growth in the long-term; however, it is monetary incentives that can immediately result in a surge in the development and subsequently, help a developing country quickly graduate from poverty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, third, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8018018018 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.335486143 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9950271052 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.636363636 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169959515088 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729006261064 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477211543472 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111835357484 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138542189518 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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