Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Due to the advent of technology, our lives have undergone a drastic change. Life, at present, has become much more comfortable, easy, and dynamic than in the past. While I agree that life has been more complicated since the revolution in technology, I could not imagine how our lives could be without it.
On the one hand, some drawbacks could be seen in the era of technology. First and foremost, it is associated with a sedentary lifestyle. To be more specific, nowadays, young people would prefer to spend more time on technological equipment rather than do outdoor activities, which is associated with an increase in the number of people suffering from obesity or eye problems. Additionally, sophisticated machines and artificial intelligence have replaced the role of humans in the industry in recent years. As a result, many workers become unemployed, which leads to a significant burden on the government for dealing with public problems.
On the other hand, technology brings various advantages to human beings. First, it connects people all over the world. In fact, thanks to the invention of high-tech gadgets such as computers or smartphones, people now can communicate with each other easier than ever before. Furthermore, the Internet enables people to get access to online classes independent of their geographical locations, which is very useful for rural students. Last but not least, smart home appliances make women free from house chores; therefore, they could spend more time on their private work as well as their family.
In conclusion, simplifying by removing technology will make our lives more and more complex. Instead, we need to find a solution to maximize the benefits of technology while minimizing its harmful effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24555160142 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90891255752 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64768683274 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.015462413 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245235181487 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702933230522 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709122223222 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14978774183 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695397235278 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.