Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress because what matters is the quality of their work To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is commonly argued that the higher authorities at companies are not giving attention to the dresses of their delegates, and I fully support this view because they focus on their working speed and behaviour to manage with others at work.

Working speed of employees is one of the major qualities of a worker. Owing to the fact that bosses are giving attention on their capabilities to finish their tasks, employers give them time to finish work accordingly, and the workers are completed their tasks in deadline. So, it is one of the important factor which takes place over the selection of dresses at workplace as well as it raises the productivity more in companies and definitely status of companies improve. Google and Facebook, for example, one of the most popular organizations that never puts dress code to their delegates rather than this, all the people come to offices in their casual wear of their choices.

Moreover, the other thing which is considered crucial is the behaviour of the employees. This is because if the worker has good qualities like to adjust with others, then team-work become easy, for the better working atmosphere at workplace. Not only this is support to the new candidates at the work, but also helped others to cope up with errors in the work; resultantly, the quality of work is flourished and checked work again and the overall development is seen. To cite an example, had my friend, Jackson, never talked with his colleague about new software, he could not have got the promotion.

In conclusion, owing to less time to complete given tasks and the overall personality to manage with co-workers in offices, I am convinced that the given argument is logically sound.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66053740993 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5124756363 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.8 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213791013532 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833709887322 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640609591746 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118721426226 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793644332148 0.056905535591 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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