Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with nationally.
It is begun 21st century. All people prefer to live explicitly clear environment. But now a days stupid peoples are habbit to all garbages throw to the environment.
Initially, what are the enbironmental problems ? it is first neccessary to explain not all people other peoples throw to the different types of rubish to the environment. For instance, farmers throw chemicals to the paddy fields, different types of shops push rubish to the environment. That's not obviously good. It is erroneous action. Firstly, how to reduce this problem. I would like to say prepare a advertisment and telecast the world T.v. channels. Don't throw to the different types of rubbish to the environment and always clean the environment. If we take a person throw the rubbish to the environment that type of person get to the remanded to the police one week.
In addition, all countries have a one president. President says, do you like to live garbage house?? I think all humans dont like to live garbage house. President get to the reaction this problem. A person throw the rubbish environment, these type of person clean the city once a month daily. However , dont do the erroneous works to the environment. Everyday clean the garden watering tge plants daily.
In conclusion, firstly warning the global people and secoundly get to the different measures to the born country. please dont cut the trees and save the trees and everyday watering the plants.
- The graph below shows average co2 emission per person in the United Kingdom,Sweden , Italy and Protugal between 1967- 2007. 56
- the graph shows the percentage of U.K. Adolescent following a vegetarian diet. 61
- The pie chart below shows tge results of a survey of the causes foor poor learning outcomes in schools in a particularly country in 2011. 56
- The graph below shows the una titles of goods transported in the uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 56
- The bar chart below shiws the global sales of television by supervision incorporataion from 1999 2012 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... live explicitly clear environment. But now a days stupid peoples are habbit to all garbag...
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Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...e explicitly clear environment. But now a days stupid peoples are habbit to all garbag...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
..., what are the enbironmental problems ? it is first neccessary to explain not all ...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...f shops push rubish to the environment. Thats not obviously good. It is erroneous act...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is problem. I would like to say prepare a advertisment and telecast the world T.v...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...t and telecast the world T.v. channels. Dont throw to the different types of rubbish...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nment and always clean the environment. If we take a person throw the rubbish to t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...live garbage house?? I think all humans dont like to live garbage house. President g...
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Line 6, column 164, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (President) must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...t like to live garbage house. President get to the reaction this problem. A person ...
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Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'throws'.
Suggestion: throws
... to the reaction this problem. A person throw the rubbish environment, these type of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... A person throw the rubbish environment, these type of person clean the city once...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ean the city once a month daily. However , dont do the erroneous works to the envi...
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Line 6, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... the city once a month daily. However , dont do the erroneous works to the environme...
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Line 8, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...different measures to the born country. please dont cut the trees and save the trees a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nt measures to the born country. please dont cut the trees and save the trees and ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00829875519 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77259385207 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51867219917 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6988379366 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.4761904762 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4761904762 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129718683927 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391262550965 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421151507539 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817423817582 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239898013816 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.59 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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