Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists including painters, musicians and poets. However, other people think that this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Art is a kind of feel and it shows the human's creativity. The argument that all type of artists should be provided assistance by the government is a subject that is both supported and refuted by many. Both sides of this argument will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
Those who say that the government should support all type of artist, feel that the art shows the culture and tradition of a country. So, appreciation is needed to artists. To begin with, in this modern science world stress is a common effect to all humans because of heavy work, all kind of art provides a best remedy to relief from stress.
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- Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists including painters, musicians and poets. However, other people think that this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 22
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Art is a kind of feel and it shows the humans creativity. The argument that all type ...
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...nment should support all type of artist, feel that the art shows the culture and ...
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... culture and tradition of a country. So, appreciation is needed to artists. To be...
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...ion is needed to artists. To begin with, in this modern science world stress is a...
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...of heavy work, all kind of art provides a best remedy to relief from stress.
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Discourse Markers used:
['so', 'kind of', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276422764228 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.162601626016 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0569105691057 0.0946595960268 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.00813008130081 0.0501214627716 16% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.00813008130081 0.0437548338989 19% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.138211382114 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0406504065041 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50675335006 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0325203252033 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.170731707317 0.0861772015684 198% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0243902439024 0.021408717616 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0162601626016 0.011925033212 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 632.0 1933.35771543 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 113.0 316.048096192 36% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59292035398 6.12580529183 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2603904387 4.20517956788 78% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336283185841 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221238938053 0.28420135186 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141592920354 0.203846283523 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.070796460177 0.137316102897 52% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50675335006 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 176.037074148 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 45.0780808353 60.7387585426 74% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0891783567 37% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 18.8333333333 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2314043361 49.517814964 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38877755511 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 40.9572271386 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 2.54545454545 1.69124875643 151% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368727579924 0.332605444948 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119793861048 0.102741220458 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0839086863243 0.0668466124924 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568749823963 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152603803104 0.148594505496 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1883777106 0.134430193775 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813373926435 0.0742795772207 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.375781329324 0.324371583561 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0638462369009 0% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310028536233 0.228012699653 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120167133931 0.058150111329 21% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 2.0 10.4468937876 19% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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