Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere.
A sector of society claims that the authority is squandering money on arts where it could be used wisely in other parts of life. In my point of view, I strongly agree with such a statement and lends my explainations in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, government should allocate money into healhcare equipment and online education in the covid-19 epidemic which is a serious threat to human. In recent days, it it seen that the number of people infected with covid is increasing greatly day per day and this lead to insufficient bed hospital so that government should give priority to spend money for buying more beds to provide hospital enough. Furthermore, it is hard to deny that the covid has led to economy recession which causes a certain number of unemployment staffs therefore authority should take consideration into account for setting up volunteer organizations to help local people. For example, at present, I am a member of my hometown volunteer organization which I donate a bunch of money as well as food for underprivileged people during the covid-19 pandemic.
On the other hand, it is a good idea for government to cut down or stop diverting funds into artists’s pockets. First and foremost, in this day and age, there are a great numbers of bad modern artists simulating doing drugs and beer which lead a bad image and health on younger generation especially children are easily mimic them. Besides, it is clear that the more bad younger generation are given birth the more economy reccession will become faster which is a demerit of any countries in the world. Hence, government should take a suitable reccomendation on speding money on arts.
In conclusion, government should not spend money on arts instead of supporting those money for other parts of life.
- Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express their thoughts and ideas To what extent do you agree or disagree 54
- Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world However these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science technology and business Why do you think that is What could be done to encourage more people 78
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time Discuss both views and give your opinion 87
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree with this view 56
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree with this view 56
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Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...end money on arts instead of supporting those money for other parts of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98338870432 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85068032162 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4929822084 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.363636364 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206111669078 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854352039036 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783930336742 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142688412804 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566117783833 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.