Some people think that governments must insist on preserving traditional appearance of old buildings undergoing renovation or redevelopment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In era of modernization, building infrastructure has experienced vital changes over the past decade. renovating and redeveloping buildings have been order of the day. Presently, it has been burning issue whether government should preserve old buildings by avoiding renovation or not? Here, I would like to accord with the given statement.
numerous points are there to shore up my point of view. First and foremost, historical buildings portrays the picture of a country's heritage and rich architectural history. However, natural beauty of such buildings which is vital to mesmerize people can be vanished by undergoing renovation and redevelopment. To be specific, Taj in India is centre of attraction due to it's natural beauty and material that has been used to create it, can lost it's attraction if renovation is performed
Further emphasising on my point of view, old buildings are source of making coming generation aware with the rich architectural history of any nation. Renovating can snatch it's natural identity. Thus, we will left with nothing to reveal our ancestral building genius to our kids. A country's true identity is it's history, culture, heritage and infrastructure. Changing those old beauties which are already on alarming rate is kind of loosing identity of a particular nation. On contrary, others have conflicting views.
They claim that, renovate can add charm in the beauty of those old buildings and can lead to attract those people as well who like more of modern infrastructure than old. They believe, some old buildings are really in worse condition and can be lost if renovation is not undergone. However, saving them through giving them new shape seems to be the only possible way to keep them alive
To recapitulate, however, renovation is certainly not undeniable, government still should try their best to keep them in the possible original shape in order to keep our heritage alive
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Renovating
...ced vital changes over the past decade. renovating and redeveloping buildings have been or...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Numerous
...ke to accord with the given statement. numerous points are there to shore up my point o...
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of view. First and foremost, historical buildings portrays the picture of a coun...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...tch its natural identity. Thus, we will left with nothing to reveal our ancestral bu...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'well', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22514619883 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.19298245614 0.155533422707 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116959064327 0.0946595960268 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0497076023392 0.0501214627716 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0584795321637 0.0437548338989 134% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.102339181287 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0701754385965 0.0403226058552 174% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95398886405 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0409356725146 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.00292397660819 0.00163938923432 178% => OK
Determiners: 0.046783625731 0.0861772015684 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0292397660819 0.021408717616 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0116959064327 0.011925033212 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1918.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2071197411 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375404530744 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.300970873786 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.245954692557 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152103559871 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95398886405 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.8168026579 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3125 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.5410418825 49.517814964 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 49.4095873786 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.32038834951 1.69124875643 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253368858664 0.332605444948 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0806633094023 0.102741220458 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0717501174878 0.0668466124924 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481731301496 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.186578478855 0.148594505496 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087670121503 0.134430193775 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514290644525 0.0742795772207 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260375383076 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0440530490179 0.0638462369009 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150561963777 0.228012699653 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380402703672 0.058150111329 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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