Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, it has been a common practice for many countries to take turns in becoming a host for international sports events. Many citizens embrace these occasions as being beneficial for the country while others don't see it in the same light.
On the one hand, sports events that involve worldwide participation also bring along many benefits for the economy of the host country. These benefits come from the increase in the tourism activities as well as the selling of merchandising related to the event. One can easily observe this fact by seeing how flight tickets are sold out quickly and accommodation fees soar high for any period that the international sports events are hosted in a country.
In addition, these sports events not only promote the image of the host country , foster its sportsmanship spirit locally and internationally but also help maintain the relationship of the host with other countries worldwide. Take World Cup for example. Thanks to holding this event, The United Kingdom has become worldwide famous for having many legendary football teams such as Manchester United or Liverpool.
On the other hand, some might point out that holding international sports events is a costly and time-consuming process for the host country. To hold such an event, the host has to prepare for years, from building or enhancing its sport facilities to preparing all the marketing and public relation events. All the related costs obviously would create a heavy burden on the taxes that the host country's citizens have to bear.
All in all, there are certainly pros and cons of being the host for international sports events. In my opinion, the advantages of holding these events outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, I believe becoming the host of these events is beneficial for the country itself and should be continued as a good practice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07540983607 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72509316538 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527868852459 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 305.0 20.2975951904 1503% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1548.0 106.682146367 1451% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 305.0 20.7667163134 1469% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 125.0 7.06120827912 1770% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257506695006 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.257506695006 0.084324248473 305% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166418374487 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169401473376 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 155.0 13.0946893788 1184% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -238.1 50.2224549098 -474% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 122.2 11.3001002004 1081% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.66 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.13 8.58950901804 258% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 124.0 10.1190380762 1225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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