Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Some advocate the view that it is beneficial for the host nation of a world-wide athletic competition while others believe that holding such events may be problematic by several financial and social drawbacks. The following essay will examine both sides of the issue prior to my opinion.
For the most part, international sports events can effectively boost one country’s tourism to another level. Firstly, innumerable spectators will be expected to board in the venue to witness sensational matches and splurge their spendings to experience an exotic culture. It is the economy that will be significantly contributed along with the most positive impressions will be presented to the rest of the globe during the event. Secondly, if it hadn’t for broadcasting purposes of the games, the organizers would not have achieved a lucrative income from commercials. So advantageous are the multicontinent events that the countries wish to conduct must be strictly qualified in terms of infrastructure and human resources.
At the mean time, organizing a highly anticipated sports event may contain specific underlying challenges regarding finance and the exposure of negative social problems. First and foremost, with many larger than life qualifications to ensure, the organizer have to invest a grand amount of money to facilitate. Brand new multimillion-dollar amenities such as stadiums, halls and arenas which can exceed the budget. It could be an unnecessary burden which amplifies the existing financial pressure. As the positive side being ostentatiously shown, the negative aspects may also be exposed such as poverty, segregations and political issues. A prominent instance is that some conducting nations have received harsh criticism from general public for abundantly spending years of people’s tax on short term competitions instead of addressing their internal pressing problems.
In conclusion, hosting an international sports event is noticeably profitable in many aspects as long as the country’s resources are in an appropriate status, otherwise it may result in serve repercussions that eclipse the foreseen benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 729, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ions have received harsh criticism from general public for abundantly spending years of people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67080745342 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21716946884 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0054141116 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.428571429 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206435809906 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060748154123 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575543456764 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130022459926 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348878477939 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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