Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. But in my opinion I both agree and disagree about it. Because I think hosting an international sports, it very special and exceptional and a big chance for your country to show the world what you are and introduce to the world your specilities, your custom and tradittionals. And for those who want to know more about your country and maybe to live there too. Hosting an international sports event is very hard but it can bring a lot of benefits like you have all the attentions around the world, people keep talking about your sports event and your country can make good relationship with other countries.
But beside the advantages there are always have disadvantages. Hosting an international sports event is very hare and take a lot of times and many people to do it. During the event there are many interviewers and viewers from all around the world watching your country and people here, you have to meet different kinds of people from other countries. And because it is a big event so the whole world are watching you if you do is wrong or make mistake, it will be very emberassment for your country and when people saying about your country they just rememnber this big mistake.
In short I think hosting an international sports event is both good and bad but if you make it right it will be a good chance for your country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... beside the advantages there are always have disadvantages. Hosting an international...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, i think, in short, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61153846154 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58643193947 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438461538462 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9888961522 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507743528326 0.244688304435 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223727614102 0.084324248473 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198157142943 0.0667982634062 297% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379350674816 0.151304729494 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124679406439 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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